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And I’m stuck between a dream and reality

Yet I don’t know where I stand

Is this too good to be true

Because I think I’m falling for you



When all the pieces come together

And I’m playing my last cards

Could you have been my best bet

Or have I taken this too far



I’m sprawled across the sheets

Just about to pull the trigger

I’ve got you running through my mind

You’ve got me wrapped around your finger



I’ve always been a hypocrite

The way I hid the truth

The way I hid my feelings

But I hid everything from you



It was more than just regret

Because I’m in over my head

How I actually thought you’d be mine

And I’m out of my league again
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:iconlady-divine:
Very nice and I like the emotions that run through this.. something I've gone through...and perhaps maybe even going through now...:)

do visit my posts and comment if u get time... :)

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

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:iconreinventedinnovation:
Thanks for the comment, and believe me i have more than enough time on my hands.. right now at least ((=

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I’m sprawled across the sheets

Just about to pull the trigger

I’ve got you running through my mind

You’ve got me wrapped around your finger
:iconlady-divine:
you're welcome.. :D

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

My Gallery - [link]
:iconreinventedinnovation:
Hey do you mind showing other people my site? ((= kind of looking for comments, ohh and I checked out your poems.. Love it ((=

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I’m sprawled across the sheets

Just about to pull the trigger

I’ve got you running through my mind

You’ve got me wrapped around your finger
:iconlady-divine:
sure thing...:)
add me as a friend..so i can check out your deviations and then spread the word..:D

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~Falsehood is easy, truth so difficult - George Eliot~
~Believe only what you yourself test and judge to be true - Buddha~

My Gallery - [link]
:icongubby:
As always, I love your style. Keep wiritng :)

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AndrewGubb.com | Empowerment in the search for truth and meaning
:iconmusicllv:
wow. this is uhm.. pretty kwel. i like it. :)

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:iconincessantdreamer:
pretty sure I've been in the situation you're talking about. I love the poem! :)
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Very Nice!

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